consider this

Phillip and Timothy has been through a lot thought a lot together, helping each other out all the time for survival. A strong relationship has developed between them, even starting to treat each other like family. When Timothy died after too much execution from trying to protect Phillip, it seem to Phillip that he has lost his grandfather not only that, but he has also lost the only person to help and guide him at that certain period, he lost his one and only connection with the real world, what anything looks like. So when he lost timothy not only that he lost a family, but he also lost a pair of eyes

another time another place

There was once a kid, named Luke Skyjumper, he was travelling in a craft when the separatist attacked, the droids attacked the spaceship and almost killed everyone aboard, but thanks heaven Luke Skyjumper made it to the escape pod with a strange humanoid called a Twi'lek his mother had warned them that tTwi'lek was different. The escape pod drifted into a small asteroid. The Twi'lek and Luke are trapped in the asteroid…

After a few months the Twi'lek, called old ben, was killed my the black hole running through the asteroid, Luke skyjumpper

And a few weeks after Luke was rescued by armed by republic

Gunship, but the old Twi'lek didn’t bake it, before he go, he took old bens light saber , it is the only thing he wanted off the asteroid.

another time another place

tweaked from the cay to star wars

There was once a kid, named Luke Skyjumper, he was travelling in a craft when the separatist attacked, the droids attacked the spaceship and almost killed everyone aboard, but thanks heaven Luke Skyjumper made it to the escape pod with a strange humanoid called a Twi'lek his mother had warned them that tTwi'lek was different. The escape pod drifted into a small asteroid. The Twi'lek and Luke are trapped in the asteroid…

After a few months the Twi'lek, called old ben, was killed my the black hole running through the asteroid, Luke skyjumpper

And a few weeks after Luke was rescued by armed by republic

Gunship, but the old Twi'lek didn’t bake it, before he go, he took old bens light saber , it is the only thing he wanted off the asteroid.

TEST CORRECTIONS

test corrections
theme= A concern, lesson or characteristic in a publication, piece of writing of story.
topic=The subject heading of a piece of writing . what the writing will be about
detain=Our troops cannot detain enemy force, so we prevent them from attacking the capital.

Theodore Taylor

Theodore Taylor

Theodore Taylor, an American author of various fiction and nonfiction books, was born on June 23, 1921 in the small town of Statesville, North Carolina.
He grew up in his town of birth, during a very historical but difficult time known as the Great Depression. Amazingly, he landed his first writing job at the tender age of thirteen, and got the idea to write his most famous publication, The Cay, while doing coast guard research on an adult book, and this book was also inspired by the Korean war and his first job. It's also interesting to note that The Cay was written in almost no time; it took Taylor only three weeks to complete it! Leisure activities he enjoyed when not writing include ocean fishing and foreign travel. When he was still alive, he resided at 1856 Catalina Street in Laguna Beach, LA

sterotype

one of my favorite movie, star wars, i think r2d2 is the most stenotype character I've ever seen, because the droid was actually played by a human cramming inside the costume. also a very stereotypic character is Jake from avatar(when hes in the alien form) he is less fake than r2d2 because he is at least playing a alien, but not a robot, but the fact that he is 3foot tall, blue skinned humanoid is superior to a walking blue and white trashcan. the most realistic character is Han solo from star wars, because he always wears a smudge of a playful smuggler, yet his face makes it hard to believe that hes bad, also the movie star wars came out earlier than the book, so everything about Han solo will be based on his appearance from the movie.

Greek mythology

   ancient greek has a lot of mythology and myths that explains life and broughts happyness. one of my favorite greek mythology is about Prometheus, the only nice titan.

  this story began when Zeus, after defeating Kronos and the titans he ordered his titan surrenderer called Prometheus to go and create mankind so the can worship him. he strictly forbidden Prometheus to give human fire, but after creating the humans Prometheus loves his creations so much that he wants to help them any way he can, so he gave us fire. when Zeus realize Prometheus had violated his orders, he tied him up and fed his heart to the crows, and uses his magical powers to keep him alive so that once his heart grows back, the vultures will eat it again, so the cycle of suffering continues.

  this story proves that not all titans are all bad and you cannot judge people(or god) by its race, even thought Prometheus is a titan, he was still honored by the Greeks because of his bravery and his endless suffering for the humans.

racism

            i once saw a movie called 'holes" it was about prisoners sent to a digging site to dig holes and recover treasure from an ancient female robber who has a nickname called the kisser.The robber was originally a english teacher at the early times where there are laws and racism against black people. she fell in love with a black people and kissed him. But at that time black people cannot kiss white people, so the black guy violated the law and was killed by the police.the english teacher became mad and started robbing people, shooting them dead and kissing the corpse in the cheek.
          if i am been discriminated, i would be very mad and will try my best to beat up people who tried to humiliate my race.

11/24/2010

finally! its thanksgiving! I've been waiting for this for an entire year and now it has finally arrived! we watched my side of the mountain movie for a a whole class, ate a fabulous lunch that contains fries, sodas, turky shushi, cakes, and many more! i played ping pong for the whole afternoon and even read the first few chapters of a book i just borrowed this morning. this is really a great day, everybody was happy and has a lot of fun! hope thanksgiving will be like this next year!

story and movie comparision

 the story my side of the mountain was made into a movie, but the movie was not exactly the same as the novel' here are some of the similarities and parts that are different
 both the movie and a novel is has Sam going to the  mountain, but one arrives by a cab while the other arrives by a bus. both of them has pets but in the movie, Sam had a pet raccoon, while the raccoon was only a friend in the book. both the movie and the book has Sam writhing down a journal, bother of them also have Sam getting and raising fearful, but in the book Sam climbed up to a tree, while in the movie Sam climbed to a cliff.bando was a musician in the movie , but he was a teacher in the book. the biggest difference between the book and the movie is that in the movie, frightful was shot dead by a hunter, while in the movie, frightful was not. also, in the movie his father never visited Sam, but ms. tuner. in the book, ms. tuner never saw sam's treehouse while his father does.
  in other words the book and the movies has different parts, but both is trying to tell a story about a brave boy who run away from home and lives on his own.

consider this

 timothy went to check things at the shore and left Phillip behind, Phillip thought that he was trying to dump him and gotten very scared. people tend to feel prejudice against others because of misunderstanding or feeling uncomfortable toward others because of being strangers.

narrator v.s. narrative

  des is very outrageous when i wake up felling one day outrageously hot. after a while i found out i was very sick. i can not breath properly, so i breath outrageously hard, then suddenly a thought struck me, malaria struck again. i told the young boss to get me watter. then i felt outrageously cold, the young boy tried to cover me with cloths to keep warm .i suddenly felt my head is outrageously hot and burning like fire, i i ru towards the sea to put it out, after tat i went unconscious.

22/11/2010

 A lot of stuff happened this Monday, we got 2 half-new students in our class, and why is it half-new?? it is because they came from 8th grade and will be in our class for the rest of the year. I also get a warper for my tennis racket handle from my coach free because i managed to hit 30 times in a row at the wall. I finished my model about my bridge. A lot of stuff happened today and it is a day full of surprises!

topic v.s. theme

  The story the highwayman was writing about a girl sacrificing her life to warn of her lover from being captured by shooting herself to create a loud sound. Who was she trying to save? She was trying to save a highwayman who robs the rich to get the money to the poor. After reading the story, I found out that the theme is “love is a powerful source”, because people tend to sacrifice everything for the ones they love. The girl shooting herself to warn off the highwayman is a good example from the story. The topic from this story is obviously the highwayman, because this that is what the story is talking about and the character was mentioned throughout the story.

living in the heart

What exactly is living in the heart? And what does it actually mean? My own definition on Living n the heart is to know and observe your environment, always happy and knowing what is going on.

So basically by living in the heart, it means to be optimists all the time. So how do you live in your heart? The answer is pretty simple yet the action required is very hard to accomplish. You need to think before you act and try to fathom what the others are thinking, and that causes their actions. Control your temper is also an important part, always think about the consequences and then decide whether or not you want to do it.

Now that we know our own definition of what living in the heart means, another phrase suddenly pops out of my mind. What is living in the mind and how does differ to living in the heart, well I think living in the mind is living in Your own imaginary world that is complete different to living in the heart. 

HELPING A FRIEND

  I helped a friend called Sean when he was picked on by one of our classmates, Sean was originaly a friend to the guy picking on him, but he later on found out his friend was only using him and making fun of him in front of people to get popular.
  Sean seeked help from me and my group of friends, we protected him from his ex-friends scolding and complaining. Sean later on joined us and left his unloyal gang belind his pevious friend was shocked by sean's actions and regretted his actions toward his friend. He turned friendly and nice afterwards and the whole class turned into friends and inite instead oof sppliting into two groups.
  Sean was very thankful of me helping him and joined our group, but he later on turned into friends with my best friend, so i thinnk i am like a third wheel now. After this issue, i think i will think twice about helping a friend.

quickwrite

  I wish I could have everything I want at anytime, like Bill Gates. I would want to buy myself a private jet, and fly around the world. i also wish that i could have every game console in the world, and every game available. I would buy myself the white house,build an amusement park, and spend the rest of my money on toy models. But private jets, white house, amusement parks, and toy  models can't make you happy all the time, you'll soon get bored of it. What really matters is a happy family and nice, loyal friends. And thats the stuff i have and want to continue having forever!

quick write

  The white boy was hugging the black man, they care for each other and didn't judge each other by race, but because of their personalities.

  What the author really want to tell everybody when writing this book is very similar to Dr.kings speech.she want her country to unite and people to take care of each other , treat each other like equals, and improve together!

  It may seem hard at first for the boy to trust the man, but at the end thay trust each other, so can our country!

quick write

   "I can't let you go right now, frightful, you have to hunt for me,please stay." Sam pleaded. Frightful did not response immediately, instead, he looks at Sam with his dark brown eyes. he was very troubled because he knew only mad humans talk to birds."Besides, i hate being lonely and needs company to make it through winter." Sam added.
    Frightful finally got persuaded to stay with this lonely man, because he can't imagine what will happen to his owner if he goes away, and he was not a truly wild animal ,he was trained and treated as a pet.

write for 15 minutes abou someone you know.

            I have a friend called sean, he is a nice person who likes to help people. He is always helpful and gives you useful advice when you are stuck. He was no taller than 155 last time we met, and a lot younger than me. Yet i am always surprised to find my friend with so much wisdom in my age. He is serious most of the time but sometimes blurt out funny jokes. He has the same personality as my grandpa,always so wise, helping people, and full of optimism.
            I wish i am like Sean, always calm yet cheerful, always wise and helping people 

essay quick write

            The most memorable person I've ever met is my grandpa.
            My grandpa always treated me like an adult and is always positive.He always tells me adages and gives me useful advice when I'm troubled
            The best thing about my grandpa is that he never shouts at me,unlike my mom, he always help me when i am stuck.
            My grandpa always takes care of the laundry and other stuff, he says that when he was young, he was too busy with his work to take good care of the family , now that he has a lot of free time left, he will help with what he can do.
            I usually hang out in my grandpa's room,watching TV with him when i am bored, and my grandpa will share stories about his childhood with me; how he made it through world war 2, how he almost got assigned to be a pilot and attack America, and share secrets to me that he has never even told my mom about.
            Since I am the only child in my house , my grandpa has become a friend to me , and that's why I'll remember him clearly whenever he's away, visiting China or America. 

quiz correction

wrong answer:

1)Hordes of animal smack into hank.
3)We don't know yet if the plant is edible or not.
4)The teacher stiff cant fathom the students thought.
5)He heard derisive laughs when he tripped.


correction:
1)Hordes of animals run into the grass field stepping anything on its way,noboy can stop them because of its great number.
3)We don't know yet if the plant is edible or not, if it is we're going to cook it.
4)The teacher still can't fathom the students thought, why did the students have to talk so much in class???
5)He heard derisive laughter when he tripled, people keep on thinking that he is very clumsy.