narrator v.s. narrative

  des is very outrageous when i wake up felling one day outrageously hot. after a while i found out i was very sick. i can not breath properly, so i breath outrageously hard, then suddenly a thought struck me, malaria struck again. i told the young boss to get me watter. then i felt outrageously cold, the young boy tried to cover me with cloths to keep warm .i suddenly felt my head is outrageously hot and burning like fire, i i ru towards the sea to put it out, after tat i went unconscious.