Tuesday, September 28, 2010

quiz correction

wrong answer:

1)Hordes of animal smack into hank.
3)We don't know yet if the plant is edible or not.
4)The teacher stiff cant fathom the students thought.
5)He heard derisive laughs when he tripped.


correction:
1)Hordes of animals run into the grass field stepping anything on its way,noboy can stop them because of its great number.
3)We don't know yet if the plant is edible or not, if it is we're going to cook it.
4)The teacher still can't fathom the students thought, why did the students have to talk so much in class???
5)He heard derisive laughter when he tripled, people keep on thinking that he is very clumsy.

1 comment:

  1. 1)Hordes of animals run into the grass field stepping anything on its way,noboy can stop them because of its great number

    4)The teacher still can't fathom the students thought, why did the students have to talk so much in class?? (Two sentences in one. Put a period in here. Also, keep the first part in past tense and it's "fathom the student's thoughts")

    5)He heard derisive laughter when he tripled, people keep on thinking that he is very clumsy. (Careful with your spelling. This says people laughed when he increased something by 3 times.)

    Correct and pass

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